The Elements Exploration: Linked Stories of Trauma
Twelve-year-old Freya stays with her distracted mother in Cornwall when she comes across 14-year-old twins. "Nothing better than knowing a secret," they advise her, "is having one of your own." In the days that follow, they sexually assault her, then entomb her breathing, blend of nervousness and annoyance darting across their faces as they ultimately free her from her improvised coffin.
This could have served as the shocking centrepiece of a novel, but it's only one of multiple horrific events in The Elements, which assembles four novellas – released separately between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters navigate past trauma and try to discover peace in the contemporary moment.
Debated Context and Thematic Exploration
The book's issuance has been marred by the addition of Earth, the second novella, on the preliminary list for a prominent LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, the majority other candidates pulled out in protest at the author's controversial views – and this year's prize has now been terminated.
Conversation of trans rights is not present from The Elements, although the author touches on plenty of significant issues. Homophobia, the impact of conventional and digital platforms, family disregard and assault are all explored.
Distinct Narratives of Suffering
- In Water, a grieving woman named Willow moves to a isolated Irish island after her husband is jailed for terrible crimes.
- In Earth, Evan is a footballer on legal proceedings as an participant to rape.
- In Fire, the adult Freya balances vengeance with her work as a medical professional.
- In Air, a parent travels to a funeral with his adolescent son, and ponders how much to reveal about his family's past.
Trauma is accumulated upon suffering as wounded survivors seem destined to encounter each other repeatedly for forever
Linked Narratives
Relationships abound. We originally see Evan as a boy trying to flee the island of Water. His trial's group contains the Freya who reappears in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, works with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Secondary characters from one story return in homes, taverns or courtrooms in another.
These plot threads may sound complicated, but the author understands how to drive a narrative – his previous successful Holocaust drama has sold many copies, and he has been translated into many languages. His straightforward prose sparkles with suspenseful hooks: "after all, a doctor in the burns unit should understand more than to experiment with fire"; "the primary step I do when I arrive on the island is alter my name".
Personality Development and Storytelling Power
Characters are portrayed in brief, impactful lines: the empathetic Nigerian priest, the troubled pub landlord, the daughter at struggle with her mother. Some scenes ring with tragic power or perceptive humour: a boy is punched by his father after having an accident at a football match; a biased island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour exchange jabs over cups of diluted tea.
The author's ability of carrying you fully into each narrative gives the reappearance of a character or plot strand from an previous story a genuine thrill, for the initial several times at least. Yet the aggregate effect of it all is dulling, and at times nearly comic: suffering is layered with suffering, chance on coincidence in a dark farce in which damaged survivors seem fated to meet each other continuously for eternity.
Conceptual Depth and Concluding Evaluation
If this sounds not exactly life and resembling purgatory, that is aspect of the author's thesis. These hurt people are burdened by the crimes they have experienced, trapped in patterns of thought and behavior that churn and spiral and may in turn harm others. The author has talked about the impact of his individual experiences of abuse and he portrays with sympathy the way his characters traverse this risky landscape, reaching out for treatments – isolation, icy sea dips, resolution or bracing honesty – that might bring illumination.
The book's "fundamental" framing isn't extremely educational, while the brisk pace means the exploration of social issues or social media is mostly superficial. But while The Elements is a flawed work, it's also a completely readable, survivor-centered epic: a appreciated rebuttal to the typical obsession on detectives and criminals. The author shows how trauma can permeate lives and generations, and how years and care can silence its aftereffects.